So this is an art trade I did with *NyanNyanLove I guess she's still working on my drawing.Oh well...anyways......um.....I forgot what I was going to say.....OH YEA! So I may start taking requests and doing art trades for friends only,all my watchers are considered my friends .And also point commissions...cuz I vhant points c: Umm...yeah.
First of all, this drawing is so cute!! I love her eyes and how they shine, and her costume is so adorable!! Great work!!
What could be tweaked a bit are her ears and wings, maybe they could be angled a bit more to create more of a 3D effect. (Don't worry, we all have these mistakes It's part of learning, right?) Also, her tail is a little too short and wobbly. Perhaps you could have made it longer and less...squigly? Lol, overall I think this is awesome!! I can tell you will be a GREAT artist someday!!
when i look at her i see a little girl who is surprised to see me the design of the cloths is pretty, i like the mixture of ears that makes her look like a cat and the wings and tail that gives her a vampire/ bit look, the face expression is very good, and the accessory gives her a cute look as well .
The proportions are good yet need some practicing, the head is little big the hands and the legs need lack some details, her mouth is far away from her nose it should be placed little bit higher, her tail needs more depth, why not making in smaller in the end-edge- this will give it an elegant look, her left ear should be more forward and her right ear should go little bit backward, the perspective of the wings need to be fixed, think of it in a 3d way like a box, the wing on the left should be smaller then the one on the right to give it the look of the girl turning toward the viewer , your folds are good but it may need some fixing.
otherwise this is a really good art you just need some practice.
What could be tweaked a bit are her ears and wings, maybe they could be angled a bit more to create more of a 3D effect. (Don't worry, we all have these mistakes
the design of the cloths is pretty, i like the mixture of ears that makes her look like a cat and the wings and tail that gives her a vampire/ bit look, the face expression is very good, and the accessory gives her a cute look as well .
The proportions are good yet need some practicing, the head is little big the hands and the legs need lack some details, her mouth is far away from her nose it should be placed little bit higher, her tail needs more depth, why not making in smaller in the end-edge- this will give it an elegant look, her left ear should be more forward and her right ear should go little bit backward, the perspective of the wings need to be fixed, think of it in a 3d way like a box, the wing on the left should be smaller then the one on the right to give it the look of the girl turning toward the viewer , your folds are good but it may need some fixing.
otherwise this is a really good art you just need some practice.
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